German Poem

Here's a poem I wrote in German class today (and people think I'm not working hard!):

Das Leben ist wie eine Achterbahn.
Manchmal sind wir nach oben.
Manchmal sind wir nach unten.
Wir müssen uns festhalten.
Und wenn du schreist,
werde ich dabei sein.
In dem Sitzplatz neben dir.

English translation:

Life is like a rollarcoaster.
Sometimes we're going up.
Sometimes we're going down.
We have to hold on tight.
And when you scream,
I'll be there ...
In the seat next to you.

Comments

[Grazyna]

I really like this poem - and for obvious reasons the English version.
But you forgot to include the part when you trick Karin to get on a roller coaster and then when she screams you are by her side.